a poem


Do you know
How to write
Poetry
Just write whatever
Pops into your head
And like butterflies
On bramble hedges in spring sunsets
Use metaphors for false illusion of cleverness
And click
Enter
So that you
Have a lot of lines
Which makes some kind of
Surprising
Rhythm
Like waves bobbing on an ocean
Like extreopotism
See I just used water imagery
And a word I don’t know what it means
But it’s all good
Because
It’s a poem

Wow that was deep
That blank line really showed that

17 comments:

  1. Daniel Paniel Cocker Spaniel14 September 2017 at 03:23

    Naomi, that is a stupid, silly, nonsensical poem.
    Start doing some fun blog posts.

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  2. Hehe. This was cool. :D I like writing silly poems, but I'm terrible at metaphors and similes.

    And yeah... what does extreopotism mean? ;P

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  3. Hee! The last two lines cracked me up :-D

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  4. Hahaha!! You're too much. Really, this was hilarious!! :D

    That blank space though...sooooo deep. ;)

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  5. Hahaha, very witty, my dear. We have a rising poet among us. :D

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  6. Naomi you are the GOAT! [Greatest Of All Time]
    I read your blog, but do not usually comment.
    Also, keep the blog look. I love all the pink!
    -Hannah

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  7. Oh my GOSH. This poem was the best thing I have read all day! Granted, it's like the fourth thing I've read all day, BUT I'M SURE IT WILL KEEP IT'S PLACE AS THE BEST THING I'VE READ TODAY.

    Have I ever mentioned, I LOVE YOUR BLOG?????
    I don't think so.
    Hey Naomi. I LOVE YOUR BLOG!!!!!

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  8. I love this poem! This is so great! I kept smiling when I read it because for me it describes why I love poetry so much.

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  10. That was hilarious!! You are a ray of light dancing along streams of joy and laughter! keep up the good work.
    Alyssa

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  11. This is good. You should write more poetry. *nods*

    (Really, you should.)

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  12. How cute!! You should write more!! :D

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  13. Lovely! Can we have some more? Pleeeeeeaaase! Pretty please?
    I want to try do a poem on my blog!

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